Beating the Story by Robin D. Laws

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Contents

How to Pretend You've Read This Book (introduction)

Foreword

Prologue

Six Essential Tips

Sit Your Ass in the Chair and Write
All the schematics in the world won't help if you're not fluent with writing words, you need the practice, like any art.
Ideas are Worthless
There are lots of cool ideas out there, many like yours - the thing that makes them work is the execution, not the concept, you have to do work to create a work
Sit Your Ass in the Chair and Read
The more works and styles you're familiar with, the more ingredients in your writer's cookbook, the better your style will taste.
Don't just Read Books, Read Life
Real life serves as both an inspiration for authentic interaction, and a way to break uniquely from tropes. Study what people do/say as if you were trying to learn how they work so as to be a person.
If You Can See Yourself Doing Anything Else, Do That Instead
The societal rewards for writing are largely mythical, write because you are drawn to or have to do it, not for money, validation, lifestyle.
Seriously, Sit Your Ass in the Chair and Write
If you still will be a writer, then write.

Making This Book Work For You

Take this method with a grain of salt - use only what works for you, don't force your work to conform to the method. Remember the Vilppu Rule.

Style Notes

reader(s), viewer(s), audience - these are the same people, just depending on medium.

Does This Sound Eerily Familiar?

Robin's previous book, "Hamlet's Hit Points" uses this beat analysis, applied to TTRPGs.

Conceiving Your Story

The Random Actor Method: An Idea Springboard

Turning Inspiration into Premise

Throughline

Core Question

The Boil-Down
Subsidiary Questions

Protagonist Type

Procedural Heroes

Iconic Hero
Iconic Ethos
Iconic Hero Team-Ups
Transformational Hero
Transformational Arc
Origin Stories
Tactical Goal

Dramatic Characters

Poles
Dramatic Resolution
Anti-Heroes
Ensemble Dramas

Supporting Characters

Antagonist
Adversaries
Alazons
Rivals
Competing Antagonists
Foils
Sidekicks
Companions
Confidants
Parallel Foils
Psychopomps
Functionaries and Rude Mechanicals
Foils as Narrators
Fleshing Out Underwritten Characters

Transformational Supporting Characters

Arcs for Parallel Foils

Thematic Opposition

Genre and Expectation

Seeking Variation
Seeking a Grounding
Stance
Validatory
Revivalist
Comedic
Parodic
Satirical
Revisionist
Meta-Fictional

The Building Blocks of Narrative

Emotional Rhythm

Hope and Fear

Ups and Downs

Laterals

Crossed Arrows

Beats

Foundation Beats

Dramatic
Procedural
Finding Your Mix

Information Beats

Pipe
Question
Reveal

Flourish Beats

Commentary
Anticipation
Gratification
Bringdown

Focus Characters

Between Procedural and Dramatic

Turning Commentary Beats into Foundation Beats

Transition Mapping

Momentum

Scenes and Blocks

Transition Types

Outgrowth
Continuation
Turn
Break
Viewpoint
Rhyme
Meanwhile
Flashback
Return
Flash Forward

Laying the Groundwork

Diving Right In

Outlining

Which to Choose?

Adaptation

Finding Your Structure

Blocked Desires

Procedural Preparatory Steps

Adversary Plan

Controlling Your Adversary's Motivation
Suspense vs Surprise
Exposition Tax
Pipe List

Disorder Rises and the Hero Responds

Bidirectional Plotting

Arranging Seeds

Mapping Your Story

Your Opener

Weak Openings

Parallel Openings

Flourish Beats as Preludes

Case Studies: Classic Movie Openings

Stories are like Parties: Best Arrive Late

But Not Too Late

Your First Arrow

And Now For The Map Part

Building Incidents As You Map

Noting Transitions

Your Sequence of Events

Getting Through Stall-Outs

Using Key Elements to Overcome Stall-Outs

Core Question Example
Dramatic Poles Example
Transformative Arc Example
Iconic Ethos Example
Throughline Example

Placing Exposition

Punching Up Brief Beats

Quick and Flat vs Extended and Vivid

Procedural Pipe

Foreshadowing Dramatic Revelations

Reiterated Question Beats

Recaps

Climactic Reveals

Loose End Reveals

Combination Beats

Goal Shifts and Wavering Protagonists

Your Closer

Escalation Point

Justifying Dramatic Turns
Clearing Out Information Beats
Clearing Out Flourish Beats
Refining Transitions

Dramatic Resolution

Circular Conclusions
"What Next?" Codas
Open-Ended and Provisional Conclusions
When an Unresolved Ending is a Cheat

Transformative Resolution

Iconic Resolution

Denouement

Reviewing Your Completed Map

Trajectory

Testing for Aptness

Check Pacing Issues

Study Your Climax
Activate Your Introduction

Eliminating Repetition

Spotting and Fixing Dramatic Repetition
Spotting and Fixing Procedural Repetition
Other Repetitions

Character Tracking

Procedural Pitfalls

Predictable Moments

Apt but Unnecessary Passages

Thread Mapping

When to Thread Map

From Map to Prose Outline

First Draft

More Agnosticism, This Time on Style

Building Dramatic Scenes

Text and Subtext

Tactics

Hitting the Poles

What is That in Beats

Building Procedural Obstacles

The Dilemma

Testing the Dilemma for Aptness

Cutting to the Dilemma

Resolving the Question

Revision

The Troubles You'll Be Shooting At

Getting the Sweep

Back to the Map

Editing and Giving Notes

Facilitator or Client?

And Now for the Caveats

Getting Started

Identifying the Groundwork

Mapping the Writer's Beats

Using the Map

What You Really Mean When You Give Frustrating Notes

Making Requests that Stick

Classroom Use

Now, Over To You

Inspiration to Premise Worksheet

Beat Mapping Quick Reference